First of all, the job must be my favor. I will feel invigorated at work. Secondly, it is well pay. This item is necessary for me and my family to live a comfortable life. Thirty, I will feel very successful when I finish the job. Fourthly, I will improve my ability thought the job. Lastly, the working environment must be free and comfortable and the relationship with colleague must be harmonic.

Thinking of the first item of my ideal job, I am not very clear what I love to do. I have a passion for computer game and cartoon but I am not sure whether I like programming game and drawing cartoon.

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Every person has his own ideal job. As far as I am concerned, there are some essential items in my ideal job.

First of all, this job must be in my best interests. I should be invigorated when I am working. Secondly, I must be well paid. This is very important to me and my family for living a comfortable life. Thirdly, I should have the feeling of accomplishment when I complete each project. Fourthly, I should be able to improve my skills through working. Lastly, the work environment must be free and comfortable, and the relationship among colleagues must be harmonic.

However, when I think back to the first item on my list, I found myself not too sure what do I really love to do. I love to play computer games and watch cartoons but I am not sure whether I would like to be a Game Programmer or a Cartoon Artist.