We address concurrency control for LLM agents sharing mutable state over HTTP, where agents cannot be modified to declare read sets. S-Bus is an HTTP middleware whose central mechanism, a server-side DeliveryLog, reconstructs each agent's read set at commit time from observed HTTP GET traffic. The consistency property it provides -- Observable-Read Isolation (ORI), a partial causal consistency over the HTTP-observable read projection -- prevents Structural Race Conditions in dedicated-shard topologies. Three contributions. (C1) DeliveryLog mechanism with three-tier mechanised evidence: TLAPS proves ReadSetSoundness and ORICommitSafety (modulo one typing axiom); exhaustive TLC at N=3 explores 20,763,484 states with zero violations; Dafny discharges 9 inductive lemmas. (C2) Empirical safety parity against PostgreSQL 17 SERIALIZABLE and Redis 7 WATCH/MULTI: zero Type-I corruptions across 884,110 commit attempts (427,308 under active contention). (C3) ORI is semantically neutral in dedicated-shard workloads but harmful in single-shard collaborative writing because preservation propagates concurrent contradictions. v2 update: the PH-3 LLM judge is now independently validated against a human annotator (Zahid Hussain, Mindgigs Peshawar) on 400 (step, shard) pairs at strict kappa=0.93 (n=93, 96.8% raw agreement). Inter-LLM-judge agreement is kappa=0.46 (boundary variance). Agent self-reports over-claim shard usage by 32% (LLM judge) to 49% (human annotator). The SJ-v4 semantic-quality rubric remains single-judge LLM-only. Source code, formal proofs, harness, annotation data: https://github.com/sajjadanwar0/sbus